江仲微 发表于 2022-9-23 23:27   全显示 1楼
作者笔力不错，这个短篇选取的背景也很棒
前面的背景铺垫不多不少篇幅很恰当  对人物心里和调教的情节把握的很强啊，恰如楼上说的 猪脚势力可以多扩展 没有写写其他家族  这笔力肯定有其他知名小说或者就是网文偷偷来写几篇练笔吧
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